Inevitable

by Beautiful Forever   Mar 16, 2008


I've tried to avoid you,
I ran away with my heart,
But nothing I could do,
Would tear us apart,

Your cute smiles and glances,
Kept me trapped, lost in a stare,
I tried to ignore all the chances,
Telling myself you're not being fair,

The dreams came to me every night,
I wrestled with my pillows and sheets,
I told myself this isn't right,
But for you, my heart still beats,

I gave up, in love with you I fell,
I tried to prepare myself for the worst,
Expecting that forever I'd be in hell,
And my life would continue to be cursed,

Now my heart feels like a feather,
The storm inside me has subsided,
All that's left is good weather,
And our futures have been decided,

I've failed to avoid you,
I couldn't hide my heart,
There was nothing I could do,
Nothing can ever tear us apart.

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This is a really good poem. I really loved the emotion in this. Although in the last stanza, first line, it didn't sound right. Try to change it a bit because it didn't sound right. It's great though. 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shadowlovely91

    True love does that to a person. Your words potray that perfectly! Amazing job!
    Keep writting!
    -Arielle

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Such a nice poem. it's great how the 1st and the last stanza are parallel but so different in meaning and mood.

    Now my heart feels like a feather,
    The storm inside me has subsided <-- these lines are so amazing and emotional!

    all in all, grat write. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Awe, very beautiful. I liked how the moods changed from the beginning to the end of the piece. :] And i can really relate to this. Only difference is that I have a tragedy. [My life is always been a tragedy] But anyway. This poem was beautifully written and perfectly worded. great write. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brandon Lee

    Aww this is a sweet poem, I give you a high five lol 5/5

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