What's Right?

by Tim Mauntler   Mar 17, 2008


How can you you determine,
How can you decide
What is wrong
Or what is right?

Follow the commandments?
Just follow the religious rules?
But so many do whatever they want
And wander as fools

They try weed
Cause God provides it
They damn others to Hell
They think they control shit

How can you tell me
What is wrong?
Just wait for the answer
It won't be long

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  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    I liked the message in this poem, Tim. It gives me the feeling you have something to say and i respect that. I like the way it was sectioned and the lines were structured. Well done.

    Greta ss

  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    How about this then, which is right or wrong, the truth or a comforting lie? What is really wrong or right. I like the brain teaser.

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