A Moment

Very well written poem. short and so meaningful. well done!

Very short, brilliant

Very short, but has a lot of meaning if one' looks closely. Nice short write Noir, although I would of liked to see some length to this poem.

Is this some kind of specific style or structure? If so I would suggest to put the style at the bottom so the readers know when they read it.

Overall a nice short and to the point poem. Good Job!!

Peace, Joe

Wow so short wonder... Nice poem, keep writing Noir

(Best wishz... 007)

Wow very good.. it so little words you wrote alot =D