Day Dream

It's a really well written piece and perfectly concise.
When I day dream, I often look up to the sky and an image similar to your work is visible. It reminds me of those days, those moments.

Well done. 5/5

Good

Coool poem xxx 5/5

Beautiful poem.

Interesting.
I feel the need to pick it apart,
and make a movie about it.

Sigh

wonderful job
5/5
~Stephen White

A subtle yet effectively written piece. Reminded me a lot of 'To A Skylark'. Having said that, this is relatively shorter. Much shorter. :)

"I envy the birds above
Graciously gliding at---
The heavens mocking"

I appreciate that dramatic pause. There's something almost sinister about it. You think I'm an idiot, I know. But for a moment it did detach this idea of a supreme bird souring above from the far greater Heavens, which in this case seem to be paired with a paradox. Am I making sense or have I used the inappropriate term?
Forgive me. It is 00.31, and I felt like being 'random'. That term is so over-used that it requires inverted commas.

Ok. I think I'm done here.
Well done, Noir. (: