Because I love you

by NicoleBaby101   Mar 22, 2008


I look at you and my heart races like a race car trying to win first prize.

i touch your cold hard skin and my fingers start to sting,
when you place your hand on my shoulder i become frozen in your trance of love and death.

i kiss you with all my love and passion for you, i can't breath and i start to lose concision

when you press your muscular body to my scrawny one i can't feel my heart race

when you are away all i can do is think of you, because i love you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Beautifully written, i use 2 relate 2 this poem but can't now. well, great work, 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    I THINK I AGREE WITH THE FIRST PERSON WHO COMMENTED, BUT IF U DO SO IT WOULD BE A NOVEL. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Great job!5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dennis

    It's a nice beginning...but I agree you could do much more with it. Let your imagination run free and don't be afraid of what others will think of the result. You might be surprised with what you end up with :)

  • 16 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    This is very sweet, however, i dont think its quite finished. great potential tho!

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