Cigars

by Veamm   Mar 24, 2008


Cigars

Fine sticks touch my lips
Causing a dirty habit
Flavoured smoke on air
Destroys my lungs indeed

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  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Lol indeed, cigars destroy our lungs and not just of those who smokes but everyone who is around from those who are smoking. I like the simplicity of this piece and overall the message. I dislike the smoke and hence I never smoke.

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    Short sweet and to the point.

  • 16 years ago

    by Syn

    Short, but very true.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Hahahaha.

    That was awesome, but wayyyyyy too short. :[ Add more pleeaase! I've never smoked a cigar, but this is still a pretty good poem. :] You descibed them very well. Great job.

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    Ha ha! Good poem!
    I'm used to smoke and did it very often, but then my girl asked me to quick and I did.
    It's a really good poem!
    Good job!
    5/5