Under pressure

by the dancing dreamer   Mar 25, 2008


Under pressure
not breaking
my heart's hurt
and still aching
try to please
don't offend
shards of glass
here to send
try to sing
block it out
don't know what
turn about
more confusion
delusion
absolution
dilution
feel the tears
still they well
what is truth
hard to tell
more confusion
striking fear
what is truth
cant you hear
whispered words
pounding sounds
trampled feet
dusty ground
more pressure
don't pause
sensing fear
digging claws
more pressure
more pressure
more pressure

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lance

    Very powerfull words
    this poem is one of the best poems i have read for a while.. i wish i could nominate it for the contest it wouldv'e had a good chance
    10/5
    you could make a song from this one :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Krathia

    Intense.
    I couldn't breath throughout your poem, it totally gripped me until the end. Good work!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by He is the Reason

    Very intense and great flow, loved the emotion flowing through it :) And no, I'm not just saying that because your my friend either lol

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