Rapture of love (Lira)

by Ingrid   Mar 29, 2008


Bodies sweating, lost in love
move incessantly to a fast inner beat
Reaching ecstasy, enough
energy to feed their need
Scents of musk and sweat rise as he takes the lead

Lira
5 lines syllables 7, 11, 7, 7, 11
Rhyme scheme ab abb

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ingrid
    Great job on the Lira challenge. What a passion filled piece.
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Hi Ingrid,

    A beautiful Lira you penned here.

    I'm going to try to write a lira soon.
    Thank you for sharing such a magnificent piece! 5.5

    *_* Sarah

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