The Girl I Used To Be

by You Kill Me   Apr 1, 2008


I saw the girl I used to be in the mirror this morning,
The girl filled with glee, not ecstasy,

The innocent by stander, at a criminal act,
Not the main event, caught in a trap,

The girl who cried when her fish died,
Not the girl who shot someone and stared right into his eyes,

The girl I used to be, not the girl who isnt me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    Love the flow of it... awesome job!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by haileyy

    This is really good katelyn !
    i loved the first stanza. the girl in the mirror just always seems to fit.
    great job !!
    -haileyy

  • 16 years ago

    by Marie

    Ive read alot of these "mirror" poems and they get boring, but somehow you managed to pull it off!! Great job =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Nia Warfeld

    That is absolutely amazing, If you are referring to yourself about this I can totally relate, keep up the good work.

    xx3 -Nia

  • 17 years ago

    by Mazie

    Amazing 5/5

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