New Beginnings (Rap)

by Lu   Apr 6, 2008


One of my old poems for a poetry contest of long ago.

New Beginnings

Children bleedin'
monsters feedin'
oh innocent child
in a world gone wild
dreams are dyin'
trips - a - flyin'
the world gone whack
dealers tradin' crack
for a taste of bend blood
turnin' names to mud
trashin', slashin'
addict -a- crashin'

flip the table round
new beginnings can be found

time to kick the brick
no more wounds to lick
listen to this poet spin a verse
death ya can't rehearse
life gives ya one shot
happiness can't be bought
rid your heart, of hate
wise up, get it straight

flip the table round
new beginnings can be found
release the voice within
new life to begin ...

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  • 16 years ago

    by MiZZ BAY SWAGGA

    THiS RAP GOEs HARD
    N iT SO VERY TRUE i SEE iT EVERYDAY ON THA BLOCC!
    N iN MY LiFE..MUCH LUV 2 YA!

  • 16 years ago

    by LoveBird99

    Great rap. It has a lot of meaning to it.

    5/5
    ~Elizabeth

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    "oh innocent child
    in a world gone wild"

    This was the part that really stuck out to me.. it is so true and is so much like me right now.. growing up everything seems so innocent and the world you meet is so crazy and wild.. you did an amazing job with this and i love it.. i love rap music too so it is muy perfecto for me!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Luanne,

    Nice rap, it has our club name in it!
    It has a very postive message also...

    Big hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I don't like rap music at all, but I would've loved to hear a beat with this. It's ver emotional for a rap piece.
    Sorry this comment isn't going to be "helpful" or long, but I didn't find anything wrong with this.
    "rid your heart, of hate
    wise up, get it straight"
    ^ my favorite part.
    This seems to give hope. Like someone reading this could finally realize that they can start over, that they don't need to feel the bad way that they do.
    And I like that. =)

    5/5

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