Greedy Cookie

by Sarah   Apr 6, 2008

A jar of cookies
Stood there before me-
Just one crunch
Will turn me so happy

Yet unmoving,
The cookies looked greedy
A mouth waiting to be
So cluttered and messy

Just one bite,
Just one crunch
It is still gazing
Longing for a touch

There it lies,
So tasty and happy
It is now saying, please-
Bite me-


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  • 11 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    I agree with Ingrid. :) Imagination goes a long way to a very beautiful and divine poem, and I understand the significance of such. :) You did a very good job. I enjoyed it. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Aww Sarah nice work girlie!
    Such a creative poem, lol..
    A poem about a cookie, I love it (and the cookies)


    ps: Is that you in the avatar? If so, you are stunninly beautiful, my young friend!

  • 12 years ago

    by Emily

    Great now i want a cookie!

    Great job, so cute :D

  • 12 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    HAHAHA, this one was really amazing, very unique, just loved it. Its nice to read such refreshing poems.

    all the best and take care

  • 12 years ago

    by eponine lovefool

    Hey well done you have a brilliant range 5/5 again, of course! fab honey xx