Inner Beauty

Good Job..Beautifully written and very inspiring..I loved everythin about it..Brilliant piece..5/5

Wow this is wow... Great great job this is your best in my opinion... Flowed perfectly.. Everything about it was great excellent job 5/5

Edit:
First stanza, third line, you mean they are. :)
Third stanza first line, yourself is one word.

Good comments:
It was a very positive poem. Short yet sweet. You rhymed consistently and the title wasn't bad.

Improve on comments:
Punctuation is inconsistent. Some areas you have end punctuation while other sentences lack end punctuation. Try to use different words. I prefer rhyming schemes with more complicated words. However, that is just me, the great thing about poetry is in the end it doesn't matter as long as you're happy. :)

Rating:
4. It wasn't a bad poem. It was, overall, written correctly and was consistent in rhyming. I wish there was a little more zest to it but other than that, it wasn't bad.

This poem holds so much truth. Always look for the inner beauty of others.

Believe in your self
And walk with pride
Don't be ashamed
Because you're beautiful face should never hide!

Great job!
Take care Cindy

Amen to that sweet Sarah!

A beautiful and proud statement and you are absolutely right!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid