I Can't Believe it?

by Steven   Apr 9, 2008


My heart is bleeding ,
I trusted you,
but I was wrong,
I didn't thought you'll do that,
the only thing I could do is,
watch you walk away,
I just can't believe it,
but sometimes you have to,
And live through moments,
you don't want,
as I look at you,
I say love is
for fools,
but just because of a idiot,
playing with the word love,
doesn't stop me for looking for it,
I'll find somebody,
who word is true,
until that day,
you'll be mark in my heart,
as a nail in my heart,
until I find somebody,
who can replace it.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Texastar

    One little suggestion if I may- I didn't thought you'll do that,
    the only thing I could do is,
    ~~~change thought to think that way it cn rhyme with thing and thn change you'll to you'd~~~~

    I didn't think you'd that,
    the only thing I could do is,
    ~~~~

    but great, great poem!!!! Keep up the good work Steven. Also loved the way you wrote it, different but wel written.

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    O this is so sad, but a wonderful poem, i love your poems keep it up.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Suicidal Love

    Great poem, well done
    your a good writer 5/5

    Sarah xx

  • 16 years ago

    by miracle

    I love this..great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Prasad Baadkar

    You will find the one who will replace it..... Marvellous Job

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