A Poet's Call

Hey how did I miss this poem???LOL...very nice and true.Sigh!I can't seem to write straight though.Goin to my favorites again.

Don't let readers to move out from an incomplete thread
As they stop reading your piece, the poem is dead

..I lke tis line..a perfect lesson 4 every0ne spexaly 4 me..tsk..tsk.. nice job!

"Play with your words
Like they touch the hearts"

Strong opening, very good way to start off a poem.

"Don't make the words so strongly wrapped
Or the readers will feel they are wrongly trapped"

Good rhyme pattern/scheme here good work.

"Touch it more mildly
Like the cuckoo's melody
As sun touches the dawn
Like morning dew touches the lawn"

Very good imagery in this poem. I liked it.

"Give it a touch of rhyme & a little flow
A subtle sweet touch just to add a glow"

Favorite part of the poem, its cute and it flows very well.

"Don't let readers to move out from an incomplete thread
As they stop reading your piece, the poem is dead "

I like your honesty in this poem. Very well done. 5/5

Very well written..

"Touch it more mildly
Like the cuckoo's melody
As sun touches the dawn
Like morning dew touches the lawn"

^^this is Beautiful...so wonderfully you have hinted on how a poem should be written..the last lines add more beauty to it..

Give it a touch of rhyme & a little flow
A subtle sweet touch just to add a glow
Don't let readers to move out from an incomplete thread
As they stop reading your piece, the poem is dead

^^ again... amazing...

Excellent write...

Ooooohhhh i love it:
"Don't let readers to move out from an incomplete thread
As they stop reading your piece, the poem is dead "
i like that - its like a little lesson to remind us all. Great idea - really enjoyed this piece.

Kelly
xx