Sunrise Til Sunset

Ahh its so beautiful for me read such an amazing love poem by you because its usually dark. Oh my hun I just adored this piece and I have no idea where to begin ...

1st Stanza:
Beautiful opening eye. I could imagine everything so nicely in this stanza which delighted my eyes and spread a smile upon my lips.

"Unlike my favorite flower our love shall always bloom,"
^Loved this line. So unique and filled with such endless beauty that it blew me away.

2nd Stanza:
I didn't like your use of the word "arteries" I feel as if you created such a blissful atmosphore and that word sounded harsh when I read it out loud. Aside from that this was my fave stanza because you described everything so flawlessly. The imagery here blew me away.

3rd Stanza:
Your last line ... oh my it just left me in awe. You always know how to end poems with a bang and leave me wanting more and this was no exception. The wording was just amazing and the flow you created .. flawless.

Amazing piece my dear.
*5/5*

I have to say, this seems passionately written.
The beauty of the piece is not evident and thus the old saying is true here:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
In this case, the reader.
This reader for one, found it beautiful.

Oh I really liked how you put a greek goddess into this. That was very creative.
It brings more beauty into the poem by having something considered one of the most beautiful things in it. I liked that.
I also liked how you used your words to explain everything. Without rhyme, it still flowed flawlessly.
5/5

Wow...
This poem holds indescribable beauty. I am speechless in a way.
You ability to portray emotions on such superb way is impressive. I could actually feel everything that you described through amazing pictures painted with words. Whole atmosphere of this piece brought me to another world and made me smile. Every line of the poem is equally captivating and touching. Your detailed imagery added intensity to the every expressed emotion.

My favorite stanza is:

- The atmosphere becomes calm and you whisper into my ear,
I'm lost within the voices of sweet nothings you have said,
Winter, Autumn, Summer, Spring shall this love forever go on,
For Aphrodite has spread her wings and sparkled light on us.-
^^^
Deeply touching and truly outstanding stanza. The ending with the Greek goddess is absolutely brilliant. I also like the fact that this write has elements of nature poem.

Keep up!
5/5

I knew from the first line that this would be a beautiful heartwarming piece, and I was right.
The descriptions of your love in such various ways throughout this piece are stunning, and sometimes cliche, but it didn't annoy me in this. You mix it up between your unique lines, I think that's why it's just so good.
Your flow, as always is great, and you ended this with a classic feel and a touch of your own. I can't say much more about this piece, because it is just gorgeous the way it is; filled with love. It makes me smile. :]

Tammie xo