His night

by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX   Apr 24, 2008


Walking alone hearing wolves howl at the moon light
Fog on the ground move slowly with you
There is a chill in the air
This is the devil's night of fright
If you see him in your dreams never scream it might be your last.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    "Walking alone hearing wolves howl at the moon light"

    I like your start, it creates a clear image in my head. Good use of imagery.

    "Fog on the ground move slowly with you
    There is a chill in the air
    This is the devil's night of fright"

    I love how this is flowing from one word to the next, very good job.

    "If you see him in your dreams never scream it might be your last. "

    I love this simple yet elegant ending to this poem .VERY good work :D keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wow... its creepy... :)
    well described..
    excellent..

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Excellent

  • 16 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    This poem is spooky! :o But very good with description. I will rate this poem a 4/4 just because it was good but kind of short hun. Me still likey it though.

    love
    xxx
    Travis

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