Ardent Waltz

You have painted a beautiful picture and composed a romantic symphony in the writting of a single poem
fantastic 5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Wow. I learned a new word today. [Ardent]

Loved it! Beautilly scripted love piece you have here that had me captivated from the beginning line to your end. Again perfect use of words and flawless flow. I liked how this poem made me feel. It was as if I was on some cloud floating into a beautiful place away from reailty. I am not sure if that was your intention but I truly did enjoy this piece.

Well done. *5/5*

Absolutly beautiful. The flow was simply perfect, and just like I could touch the sweetness of the words, and that's what real love is all about.
Loved how you repeated beggining with end, made whole poem stronger.
Wording was amazing, and vocabulary, well had to look up most of the words to understand the whole meening. :D

5/5 Perfect poem.

Yay, my little not-so-creative mind understood this. I very much liked this stanza,

"Passionate kisses form fragrant addiction,
morphing hesitation into liquid lullabies
crowned with whispers of elegant fiction;
hand in hand, pupils fill with hues of fire."

It's so creatively written. I can feel your passion for writing in all of these poems. It's wonderful. 5/5

Wow, <<that about sums up everything. Its overflowing with emotion, alot to take in for one read so I read it twice. It is beautiful, like the poetic version of a candy store paradise. I liked the repeat of the first stanza at the end, that ensured its closing with sweet images that lingered in my mind. well done