Alone

by amandalynn   Apr 28, 2008


I don't want to be alone like this
I want someone to understand me
and like me for who i really am..
I want to be able to tell someone all my problems
I want someone there when i need them most..
I wonder if I'll ever find someone like that..

And years later, I've found that someone I want so bad.
Yet we're both in a relationship..
And it saddens me to know he's holding her..
And we both like each other..
It kills what is left of my heart, soul, mind, body.
I don't know what to do anymore.
He makes me happier than anyone in this world.
Even more than my current boyfriend.
I can't help but cry at night..
I'm like a lost puppy,
I just don't know what to do.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Whats meant to be will be? you never know x

    good poem xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    Wow, i like what you've added to this poem. it makes perfect sence. I think when that person and you are finnally together, you should add even more to it to make it kind of like a timeline. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    IT WAS OKAY I DIDNT REALLY FIND THE RYTHM BUT YEHA!... SO ITS A 3.0 BUT THAT IS REALLY NICE TI=O HEAR YOU LOVE HIM THIS MUCH WHO MAKES YOU OPEN UP...
    IT TAKES TIME TO GET SOMEONES HEART.

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Hey there, little lady!

    I know it's tough, and hurts like a splinter in the finger and kick in the knee.
    But it'll work out, you know. =)
    *huggles*

    Good poem, though. Full of emotion; very important in the writing of poetry. ;)
    Keep up the fantastic work, and hang in there, alrighty?

    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Wow i thinks its really good. I know how this feels. But if you 2 are so into eachother like it sounds like then i think you 2 should dump the guy/girl your with and dtae eachother you 2 are leading eachother on! I say go for it!

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