My Senses

by xxKelsey   Apr 28, 2008


My life as I know it has many flaws
My senses work against me, I'm all alone
Darkness penetrates my eyes
Blocking all light, all hope
The frost engulfs my body
Blocking my retreat, keeping me still
Silence, the sound of my heart
The beating slows, till nothing
Blood dripping from my mouth
The foul taste, my innards exposed
Death all around me, yet I remain alone
My body, bruised, rotten, decayed
My senses work against me, I'm all alone

-Writen by Dylan Walker

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  • 14 years ago

    by She Loves Me She Loves Me Not

    Very well written poem, flowed very well. Keep up the good work!

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This was so sad. I really love your style. You tell it so plainly..but it left a lasting impression on me. Very nice work. Keep it up. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by 4EvErMaKeBeLiEvE

    This makes me think of tghe Twilight and the Dark Hunter series. They are all about vampires falling in love. This was very well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Laura

    Liked the poem...it's really powerful..keep up the great writing!
    Laura

  • 15 years ago

    by HuRtInG bEcAuSe Of YoU

    Good job. Great amount of feeling put in it.

    5/5

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