You Won't See Me

by RobinAnn13   Apr 29, 2008


----just in-case, I need to say that *word* means that word/sentence was said by someone else

*Why do you hide?*
To escape what is real
To hide from the truth
So I don't have to feel

*What truths don't you like?*
My great longing for you
The love in my heart
I don't want to show through

*Why hide that from me?*
You don't feel the same way
You love another
And that's how it will stay

*What makes you say that?*
We could never truly be
I've been nearby all along
And still, you won't see me

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  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    This is a really sad poem. I don't think the flow was as good as the other ones. But it's still excellent. At first I didn't understand it, but I got to the second one and it was very understandable. I like the uniqueness of the poe; by that I mean the style of the writing. The way you made the first line of each stanza someone talking.

    Excellent 5/5
    Soda E>

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good job xxxx

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