by Mister 47 May 2, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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In the past, i used to sit by the radio , |
by marclin
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Good ... it has a resemblance in the song..... YESTERDAY ONCE MORE by THE CARPENTERS....or maybe you were inspired by the song.... |
by nina
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More beatiful that the first one |
by aislynn
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Your poem has a lot of errors in it, actually... too many. I like reading poems but one thing that gets really annoying is when people don't check their grammar, spelling, or capitalization. You should check your work before you put it up. Maybe you'll do better next time. |
by Colleen
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I love this poem i no how you feel!!! |
by Sarah
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Wow that was beautiful ... simply beautiful ! Well written and beautifully penned. It's heartfelt, honest and sweet...And behind each line lies a sad sorrowful cry...5/5 great job, keep it up |