by Wake May 7, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Our faces fall apart |
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So sad, the words are so touching.. It is easy to picture what is going on in the poem and makes me feel helpless in a way >.< Maybe because I can relate with the feeling of being alone and wishing someone was there to help. At those times it's always nice to have a friend to talk to. They listen and make life easier =) |
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Omg... ths is gorgeaous. you are an amazing writer. |
by S R P
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I really enjoyed this poem. It was a great piece, and honestly, I didn't see anywhere where it could be improved. My favourite part: |
by Baby Rainbow
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Keep going, this is great work xx |
by Ash
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An amazing piece of work and your style is really unique. Every line just fell into place and the whole tone was set out straight from the start. Keep it up! 5/5 |