Pray

by emovampire   May 12, 2008


Thoughts are clouded,
Knee's are weak,
Hands are shakeing breathing deep.......

Cutting deeper wanting to weep,...
Take some pills its easier to sleep,...............

Droplet stains on the sink,
Maybe you cut to deep,..

Take a breath calm your self try not to scream,
Close your eyes say a prayer.....
To god IF you dare,.....

BUT are u really sure he cares???,................

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  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Wow. i can totally relate to that. an amazing poem. it was raw and powerful and i love it. 5/5. the rhyming was fabulous. keep it up. ~KM~

  • 15 years ago

    by Jessie

    Very well written, Very sad, but short, Lots of emotion shoved in there, and i like the wrhymes.... You hsould check out some of mine

    cheers!!:)
    Maddi

  • 15 years ago

    by im not the cause

    Wow intense
    really intense

    good

    kiwi

    wanna read mine?

  • 15 years ago

    by Lauren

    I loved reading this poem. Fantastic work.

  • 15 years ago

    by VYXSIN

    I enjoyed reading this poem, the beginning was great but you kind of lost me at the end. i like the language and the personality put inot the poem. Good work

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