Change

by ninjamonkey   May 12, 2008


You can brake my heart in two
you can hit me till i bleed
but you can't crush who i am
you can change certain things about me
but you can't change them all

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  • 13 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    I like this... alotta strength but u know some things can change as long as its not all of u :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Andy

    Pretty good poem :)!
    short but really quite good.
    4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Angel Demetrice

    Nise but needs more words in it but i like it very nice

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    Nicely done ^^ Simple and to the point, but still shows a great message.

    I think you could make this poem even better if ya expand on it, but save that for another time, I think ^^ It's great the way it is
    4/5

    UzumakiPride
    Hatori

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