Six hours

by Valiantpenguin   May 13, 2008


Six hours last Monday,
I was completely numb
My heart was torn out
And thrown on the ground

Six hours last Monday
My whole world was gone
The sun that keeps me going
Had left me completely torn

Six hours last Monday
He did what he thought was best
He left and said we're moving too fast
But that was just an excuse

Six hours last Monday
I longed to join the dead
My heart was gone
My world had left

Six hours last Monday
The worst six hours of my life
But now i know, he loves me so
And we're back to how we were

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  • 15 years ago

    by Beautifully Disfigured

    Oh my im sorry you had to go through this tianna. hey look on the bright side, at least it wasnt forever, you go thim back didnt you? good job on the poem. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Lisa

    I liked it...good job

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good work xx

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