The thought of you is too much to handle

by X Harlea X   May 14, 2008


It is hard for me,
all the time,
to live in such a bad life,
cause you left me when i was two,
then came back when i started school.

i let you back in with open arms,
because i missed you so much,
and i hated not knowing my dad,
but then i found out that horrible news,
and the sadness came back out.

three years later,
we had a big fight,
and i said that i hate you,
and caused you to drink,
and that same night you died.

fours years later,
here sits the little girl,
that caused you to take that last sip,
and it is way too much for me to handle,
cause every time i think of you.

it feels like i am dieing inside,
cause i caused you to drink,
and i didnt even take time to think,
and now i cry while writing this,
cause the thought of you is too much for me too handle.

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  • 15 years ago

    by MissMeg

    Wow that is a big load to carry all by your self. did that actually happen to you? i'm so sorry if it did. if u need to talk i'm here for you okay.
    my favorite part was
    fours years later,
    here sits the little girl,
    that caused you to take that last sip,
    and it is way too much for me to handle,
    cause every time i think of you.

    it feels like i am dieing inside,
    cause i caused you to drink,
    and i didnt even take time to think,
    and now i cry while writing this,
    cause the thought of you is too much for me too handle.

    you wrote it so beautifully.
    keep it up hun
    i give it a five even though i feel it deserves so much more.

  • 15 years ago

    by Dustin S

    I agree with travis. Harlea, 5/5 no doubt. If there's anything you need come tell me ok? Good no excellent poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    :( This poem is so sad. I am here for you little one. You know I'm willing to take you in as soon as I can. I will be out on my own soon I promise you. I'll let you be free and feel safe instead of having to be hurt and dealing with depression. I want you to be a healthy active girl and I know you have the potential to do that hun. Hang in there I'll be your rescuer some time soon!!
    As for the poem I rate it a 5/5 but much much more then a 5 in my heart.

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