by Michael D Nalley May 17, 2008
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
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Does darkness exist, it certainly does |
by East Poetry
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Darkness....infinite nothingness |
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This is very good as well, and has great emotion. However the rhyming of romance and balance is a little shakey but it works as slant rhyming and doesn't ruin the piece. Also the meter was a little off now and then but it was still a very good piece. 4/5 i enjoyed reading this piece |
by ECILA ice
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Wow very well written. you brought up the hope despite the obstacle that every indidual pass through, and on how you try to point out that balance is not merely a word but it really exist.. |
by Kitten
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I really enjoyed it i like your rhyme sceam i liked the last line as i was reading it i kept thinking oh this dosnt work but then as i read on it all fit together so perfectly |
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This was an okay piece. I felt though, that a lot of this poem was missing something, or perhaps it had too much of something. Sorry I can be more specific. |