My Feet Won't Move...and I hate it

by MissMeg   May 18, 2008


We don't talk the way we used to,
Or act like we had before.
And each day I feel as if
We are drifting apart even more.
And I hate it.

It's like "we" don't even matter anymore.
It's like you don't even care.
And even if you're right beside me,
I feel like you're not there.
And I hate it.

I don't understand what's going on.
It's more than I can comprehend.
So even though I want to cry,
I smile and I pretend.
And I hate it.

I'm so confused.
And I don't know what to do.
It's my heart I want to follow,
But my feet that just won't move.
And I hate it.

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  • 13 years ago

    by chind

    I loved this also. I like how you ended every stanza the same, and the emotions put forth were really strong, nicee!

  • 14 years ago

    by withlove

    The last stanza is great!
    i think it captures the conflict you face between your heart and the rest of yourself very well
    and you make good use of repetition
    good job =)
    4.5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    I so could relate to it!!!! beautiful!!! :)
    Reminds me of my story...

  • 15 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    I think many of us have been in this situation before and its hard. You wrote this so well expressing strong feelings.
    Nice job.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lisa

    Another great poem...and I love it 5/5

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