Sick Love Songs ((remember who you are))

by StandStill   May 22, 2008


Cross my heart
Hope to die
I swear to God
The daisies lied

Take my breath,
Throw it away,
Knock me off my feet,
Gonna jump anyway

Hold my hand
While I die
Prince Charming, dearest,
Please, don't cry

Midnight strikes
The ball's half past
Pre-destined failure
Lose slippers glass

He never comes
Slippers are never home
Magic fairies
Leave me all alone

Take a breath
Count to five
Keep this failing
Heart alive

Make a wish
On a shooting star
Remember the failure
That you are

**edited for flow**

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  • 15 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    Wow gabby

    Thats just

    How do you manage to get so much power into all your poems?

  • 15 years ago

    by blind soul

    WOW! that was truly beautiful! i love it its flows so well and great emotion!!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by CalGirl

    Wow...
    this prince charming guy really makes me think of Kyle...
    I love it!
    It's exactly how i feel... :]

    Keep it going!
    Sophie

  • 15 years ago

    by KJ

    Loved everything about this poem. Starting with the flow, which was absolutely perfect. Also, your choice of vocabulary was amazing
    Overall, perfectly and beautifully written
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Wake Me Up

    Beautifully written. Flowing is extremely well done.
    I can't wait to read more of your work.

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