Tears

Wow, what a true way of describing tears.. this was just so.. true. i know i already used that word, but thats all that really comes to mind. I really enjoyed it and your description was very well written and the flow was good.
5/5

How expressive this poem was. It was more then words but a video into the mind and emotion.
wonderful job

Grant, my amazing friend,
The simply astounding concepts you choose to so eloquently express yourself through leave me feeling not only have I had a guided tour through your mind and soul, but I have had the privilege to follow the path that leads to the treasures of your heart .

The concepts with which you choose to write from is what makes me aware of your great poetic ability.
I believe concept to be the foundation for emotions to flow, because perception is to cause like emotions is to effect :-- such as from the final stanza from a poem--- Shades of blue.

As I journey through the spectrum of life I now find,
It’s color more beautiful by the light from within.
A concept that reaches beyond my mind ,
to ignore it would be an emotional sin.

With most all you write You continually allow me to become once again emotionally cleansed through the enlightened concepts from which you write. I will never again look at a tear the same .
Thank you for simply being you and giving us readers your all in verse
YOUR FRIEND, YOUR ADMIRER JIM

Very well written 5/5