Torment

by Spirit   Jun 4, 2008


Yes, I know I am stuck here
but perhaps I'd like to stay
Somehow I feel much safer
without a conscious to obey

Yes, I have stopped fighting
and I know you'd say I can't
but right now I'm not suffering,
So that wish I will not grant

Yes, I do have problems
or at least, I once did
and if you want me to face them
Well, that's something I'll forbid

Yes, I know I am crying
I was cheerful till you came
but as you stand before me
All I feel is pain.

Yes, I know I'm shaking
My hurtings have reappeared
I thought that I could end it
If only I'd come here

and Yes, I was right
Here my pain won't dwell
I was free but I had managed
To wind up here in Hell

Yes, I know you loved me
but my monster still remained
You'll never know how badly
I wanted free of all those chains

yet now you are here with me
A husband with his bride
but how did you get here
When I'm the one who died

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  • 15 years ago

    by Gizmo

    I think again you are talented in a way that is unusual, you have a neck for writing poems that will touch people but are lighthearted in a way nbot serious and hard writing just light.
    they carry messages which stick to you, your vocabulry is never over the top and easily understood. i loved this poem well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This one makes me sad. It also reminds me of my failed relationships

  • 15 years ago

    by she

    Once again, your flow was great
    like the before and after,
    well done

  • 15 years ago

    by Bhavin

    Hello Sam,

    Welcome back. I was eagerly waiting fo your next poem. And I am more than touched to read it. I can feel its written from the bottom of the heart because I can see the honesty in the words. Carry on buddy, and relax... because you are unknown that you remain the best for me. Take care. Njoi.

    Regards,
    Bhavin

  • 15 years ago

    by damont

    Because this person came around you started to feel different like the way you described as being hurt it seems. he is the cause of the pain. i like the poem keep writing.

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