Love Is A Mystery .. Solve it.

Another great idea for a poem. Trying to explain why and how you feel when you're in love. You did a way better job of explaining it than i ever could. :-) My only advice would be to work on the transitions a little but otherwise this was superb. (5/5)

Even though this is a love poem it felt very dark to me (sorry) I felt as if the "speaker" was condradicting(sp) love. As if that perso was telling me that love is unfathumable(sp) and completly unreachable. I felt a slight sting of betrayal in your work but maybe I read it wrong. It's still a good poem

What really threw me off was the dispear that I also felt (like a loss) Prehaps maybe your "speaker" had a perfect relationsip and to her it was to perfect. She started to question the love she was feeling instead of just feeling it. then she got tossed aside.

so terrible for such a lovely poem to have such an outragously sad under tone.
and way it was inspiring
5/5

Absolutley true! i couldn't have said that better
i think you are right when you say it can't be
solved b/c there are so many different kinds
and just so different for people
amazing

I liked this poem because it grabbed me from the first line and i was instantly drawn. it was short, but had a really powerful message, yunno?? i totally agree with the message, love is so complicated, and sometimes you just have to roll with it. I also liked the complexity of it, not simple, but not so complex that you get confused. so, really good poem, 5/5 Caitlin =)

I definaltley agree with the poem. Love is so complicated, you don't just know everything. Nice Job brought across very well