Endless love

by crystaljean88   Jun 16, 2008


Stare into my eyes,
show me your love.
I know your mine,
You came from above.

When you need me,
Shout my name.
I will come running,
To take away your pain.

Never letting go,
Ill hold you tight.
Whenever you need me,
During day or night.

Tell me your feelings,
Straight from the heart.
Ill listen to your words,
we'll never break apart.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow! This is a really good poem. I enjoyed reading it very much. I think you did a wonderful job on it. Keep on writing! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    3rd stanza last line if you take out "During" it will sound and flow better. Other then that the flow was ok and the word choice was great.5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Infected with His Deadly Love

    It was a good poem.
    It rhymed well and flowed good.
    It just felt like something was missing.

    Overall good poem 4/5

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