HEAT OF PASSION

by Muhammad Junaid   Jun 18, 2008


Come close to me,
Just hold my hand
Forget about the fears,
Beside you, here I stand.

With you and me,
This moment is so precious
You are caught close to me,
Nature around is so fabulous.

Lets feel the passion of love,
In our heart that we bear
Close your eyes and keep silent,
Don’t worry I am here!

The time seemed to have frozen,
With you here in my laps
Lets feel the heat of passion,
Before the time here is elapsed

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  • 15 years ago

    by Bree

    I really like this poem..i gave it a 4/5 because i was a little disappointed that it didnt have more to it lol very well done

  • 15 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    The time seemed to have frozen,
    With you here in my laps
    Lets feel the heat of passion,
    Before the time here is elapsed
    ----
    What a passionate stanza. sweet and wonderful
    This poem I found very nice I guess I need to read more of yours

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachelle

    I like ur poem 5/5 I think good job

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    The time seemed to have frozen,
    With you here in my lap
    Lets feel the heat of passion,
    Before the time here has elapsed

    Just minor details:)

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    This was really a great write,
    I love reading really romantic love poems cos
    it gets me thinking of my boyfriend who I
    love with all my heart.
    I loved your use of words
    and thought this poem was really dreamy and romantic.
    Keep up the good work,
    hope to see more soon
    love shell

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