Unoticly noticed

by McMuffin   Jun 19, 2008


I never go just off looks,
They do not last as long as books,
They taunt you greatly and annoy you much,
Great to be with but only based on touch,

The popular are in and the losers are out,
Little do they know they are the best no doubt,
I notice one I notice 2 I noticed 3 I notice them all,
I notice you in particular before that season of Fall,

Like your eyes the trees were green,
The area around us was grand and serene,
We were sitting there you and I,
I didn't know what to say I thought I would die,

Finally something was said as I sat there in shock,
I listened to her beautiful voice as my world she did rock,
Thy hands shake as my body starts to get hot,
The outside is cool yet I feel like water in a boiling pot,

You are a girl with such beauty yet no one notices,
Your beyond any ones dreams and make me lose focus,
You can destroy me and tear me down,
Or you can build me up and show me around,

You have a spell over me that is so great,
You have the power to make me happy at such a rate,
Your fun to be with and stand for what you believe,
You support many things with little to receive,

I love the way you think and I love the way you walk,
Being around such beauty makes it hard to breath or talk,
Every time we hug I feel a sense of safety and protection,
Every time we are together I feel like we were not mistakes but perfection,

You are a great person and I love you as friend and even more,
You do not notice me as much as I do when you walk through that door,
I promise to be the best I can be for some one like you,
I guess it is just not meant to be for I am not noticed to.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Amaranthine

    OooOOOo one I haven't read yet =]
    This was a good read but it really makes me wonder. So he notices her but she doesn't feel the same for him. Is that wat it is?

    the beginning was so nice and beautiful.
    Nicely done.