Bound and gagged

by Amber   Jun 20, 2008


Sitting here in this room
I sensed evil. I sense you
have done wrong yet I
can't figure out what.

Could the wrong be your
charm and how you use
it to get people like me
here?

Maybe that's part of it,
but what else am I missing?
I sense more evil than that.
I know there is more, but
what is it?

I sit there and ponder but
I just can't seem to figure
it out. But then I turn around
and your're right behind me.

Your sneaking up on me like
a lion does to its prey. That's
when I realize what your evil is
as you bound and gagged me and
took my life away.

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  • 17 years ago

    by HvN

    Wow this is great, i've never read it this way before! :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    It out. But then I turn around
    and your right behind me
    Wrong your. It's you're.

    Your sneaking up on me like
    You're*

    Other than those two errors it was pretty good. It was a unique twist. I like how it was only at the end you said you were bound, gagged, and kills.

    Four out of five.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Another chilling write.

    Writing about a feeling, an undercurrent of suspicion, an air of distrust. Was it what he said, how he looked, or maybe whispers from others?

    A mysterious write, wonderfully woven - leaving the reader to fill in the gaps.

    Well done

    Michael

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