Let us be?
by Charles Jun 22, 2008
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Like a dagger that runs forever deep, this pain in my heart and soul I just cannot keep. The love in which we once had, you broke it like a flower stem, without the painful look of being sad. "let us be ?". Now you still want me I can see, the way you make me feel is not of this world, I would lay my life down for you happily "let us be?". So here we are, so far yet so close the love we share is what I treasure most. I want you back as you can see, do you think you could "let us be?" |
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15 years ago
I love it. has a good flow!~~~ Great work. Keep it up.=)
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15 years ago
by MoveAlong
I luv this one. great flow. Reminded me of a song. haha great.
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15 years ago
A sad poem, but need to edit a little
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the love in wich we once...(should be)
the love in which we once
----Sorry it's habit:) I'm a teacher:)
spelling is important in order for others to take your poem seriously. And we all miss once in a while.
good job, well done -
15 years ago
by Hollywood
I liked but once again fromat and read this....The love in wich we once had, and think what needs fixing but i did like it!
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15 years ago
by Unamed
Aww...so sad...
i hope she gave u the chance to 'be'....
<3 Aly
