Happy Forever {Triquatrain}

by BREEawNUHH   Jun 27, 2008


He's so amazing, sends my heart blazing.
He's the best thing to happen to me.
I'd be lost without him, I hang on to his every whim.
But best friends is all we're meant to be.

I'm crazy in love, he's an angel from above.
The only one who can make me smile.
I'd bring down the sun, do everything until this life is done.
To be with him even if only for a while.

He's my heart and soul, makes me lose control.
Everything I've ever wanted in a man.
His eyes are so blue, and I know his love is true.
For him I'd do everything I can.

I'll make him happy forever, always be together.
He'll never need to worry.
I wish I could make him see, he'll never regret choosing me.
His mind won't be blurry.

I can swear, I'll always be there.
Do anything he could desire.
This crazy feeling, our hearts are healing.
And I can promise this love will never tire.

Briana Coulter
06/27/08

**A Triquatrain rhymes like this:
{a, a}
b
{c, c}
b

{d, d}
e
{f, f}
e

{g, g}
h
{i, i}
h

{j, j}
k
{l, l}
k

& on and on..

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  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Awww. Dang, I've been going through this same exact thing lately. This expressed everything I could ever feel for the person that I like. You basically took the words straight from my mouth. This style that you used yet again was very unique and I'm gald to see it again. It's a wonderful choice of style. It works neatly with the poem and helps the flow be smooth and easy to read the piece. Anyways, overall.. I'm going to have to say a 5/5 again. This style is really intriguing and very unique in it's own way. You did a excellent job expressing your feelings.. and how this person is perfect, yet.. best friends is all the best you can have in return. (: 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Beautiful sweet poem!

    i really like the rhyming scheme in this one.. its different from most poems that i've read.

    great job. 5/5