Thank you for your gentleness(M)

I like it

But what I can give you?
I am just somebody you will forget
I feel my heart empty in a sweep

^^So much resignation within these words...but you are right: sometimes we just lose the one we love and there is no turning back.
You did a good job in portraying your emotions.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

I loved this piece it was so packed with passion and was just a genuinely powerful piece, your words stuck with me and i found myself captivated to read on. it was beautiful in its own sad way which showed your true emotions. i loved this piece, it was an excellent write from start 2 finish. 5/5

**I will plant you inside my heart
Maybe tomorrow you will grow to be another dream***

loved that part.. it was really touching. the whole poem wasn't planned.. or any use of complicated words.. it just came right out.. thats what i like about it.. its just came from the heart..

One da best i've seen!
You really are turnin keen!