by The Queen Jul 21, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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Tears In Your Hand |
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Very good that's one lucky guy lol nicely written and had alot of emotion |
by khobo
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Nice, nice. It's the thought that everyone has in the back of their mind, very relate-able. The third stanza is my favorite. =) In the second line of the last stanza, did you mean 'defined'? Good work. |
by Scorpio
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Sweety, |