Wow this poem was amazing. you said what was on your heart, and that's a great thing. you expresse yourself wonderfully.
These things so bad are in my past
The scars I have will always last
And the years go by like a shadow cast
My strength and pride have still held fast
that stanza was my favorite of all of them. i feel i could relate to it the most, it was like you said just how i felt. you can really make your words come to life, and you write so your reader's can relate, therfore making it easier to understand your work. excellent job. 5/5.
No i've been there. I know.We live in the same world full of sorrow and dispare. But Once we've climbed the mountain of fate, on the otherside is paradise. We first got to climb through all the rough edges, and cliffs. As we do this we form our body and our mind to be ready.