Midnight death

by goot   Jun 3, 2004


I close my eyes, my life pains
I feel it run straight from my veins,
The open wound, a single slit,
I hope to god they wont notice it.

The phone call comes, my heart throbs,
My sisters look at me, cooing sobs.
I hold back tears, the rushing burn,
To the door, i slowly turn.

My mother, dead white, rushes to me,
I struggle away and try to get free.
She holds out my wrist and pulls back the plaster,
Now i can see it, her heart beating faster.

My wrist, it is open, heavy blood from my veins,
Now I'm releasing all of my pains.
"let me bleed! let me die! oh please let me go!"
My sisters, they're bawling, they don't need to know.

Now i am crying, alone in my room.
What you don't know is, this is my doom.
Goodbye to my family, the ones that i love.
Now i am dead, I'll watch from above.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Flea

    ~Flea~
    Goot i'm sorry if i don't support you when i'm needed not that you ever seem to need me any more but i am here to help you any time... i may not show it all the time... but really you know i'm there for ya...if you ever harmed yourself again or killed yourself... you know i would die and meet you after death... where ever that may be... i'll be with you every where i'm here and there for you...

    goot i love you as a friend your the closest person to me...but we seem to be slowly drifting apart...

    ~Luv Flea~

  • 19 years ago

    by Carrie

    Hey Goot It caz i was doin a random search and came across your poems i hope you dont mind! read my poems and let me no wat u think k! i love your poems

  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    really great job, you rhymed that very well, I just don' tunderstand if the mom came in there, why didn't she save her daughter?...well anyways, i really liked that one, I know hat i can realte cutting. but stay strong ok! :(

    Love,
    Danielle

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