Twist Of Fate

"Was it only a twist of fate,
That brought them together?
Or was it a meer couincadence?"

The only problem I had with this stanza was the mispelling of "couincadence" it's actually spelled "coincidence" but this is a common mistake. :)

"What ever it was they were glad.
They were so very much in love.
And couldnt live without eachother."

I like this.It allows the reader to get an idea of the passion between the two and the seriousness of the situation.

"Untill another twist of fate tore them apart.
They fought alot and said cruel things.
Their daughter cried for them to stop with no luck."

This to me was the turning point of the poem allowing the reader to see the darker side of the situation for all good does indeed have some darkside about it.

"the man left and the women cried.
The duaghter was horrifed.
They didnt know what to do."

I sense such hopelessness within this stanza.Very powerful indeed.

"The reason that they fell apart.
Was because they lost faith in one another.
Fate can bring you together and tear you apart."

Ahh words so true.Your description of fate was well thought and greatly expressed.This was my favorite stanza.

"So when you love someone,
Dont lose your faith,because it might be
the most heartbreaking thing you could do."

Once again words so true.Overall I really enjoyed this poem cause it played through like a movie in my mind.You have great talent and should capitolize on it every chance you get.A great read indeed. 5/5 ;)

I love how you taught a lesson in the poem and it makes a strong point it makes an impact on me cause i lose faith so often but reading that just inspires my faith to be strong! great poem! 5/5!

I love the title o the poem a lot..and the idea and the message of it was deep and emotional..
Keep up the good work..