I'm sorry

by sarah   Aug 2, 2008


Honestly i don't know from where to start
I'll start by saying I'm sorry
sorry for breaking your heart
for making you go through the misery
i never thought I'd feel this way
sailing in this world feeling so lost
believe me this isn't something i thought I'd say
but i am sure all this would have a cost
from the beginning i thought we were meant to be
i believe this is something i can't explain
we were so damn blind not see
that we will eventually go through the pain

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  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Wow. This was excellent. The only thing i would say is like above, break it into the stanzas. But apart from that this poem was really well written. Flowed very well and your rhyme scheme was brilliant. Very enjoyable read and its added to my favs. Nice work. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Mister 47

    I would say a great one !!
    just break it into stanzas it i s not good to read somthing 1 block ,

    the rhyming is wonderfull good job

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