Empty

by Kuro   Aug 11, 2008


They tear me down until there is nothing left
Rip everything out, but leave regret
Forever crippled, I cover my shame
Put on a mask and create a new name

Nobody knows that I'm empty inside
Play it cool, but have no pride
Rather than tell them my disgrace
I put up a smile and get a new face

Fill the void, cover the hole
Hide the fact, I have no soul
It's hard to fake what should be there
I will never fit in, but I can't seem to care

Nobody knows that I'm empty inside
Play it cool, but have no pride
Rather than tell them my disgrace
I put up a smile and get a new face

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  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    Truely amazing and inspiring. i really admire your work, and thats hard for me to do.
    again, another poem i can relate my past feelings to.

    excellent.

    IBE
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  • 14 years ago

    by mckenzie

    Interesting poem. I like this.

  • 14 years ago

    by Dorothy

    Wow!!! that was alot better than mine... u have some real talent... btw i sing lol... i liked it alot! now i have to go read more of ur poems... take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Aww. so sad. But i loved it. Really great style. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    I liked this piece alot. very unique, and the form was creative. you have good inspiration when yuo write it seems. that's a wonderful thing. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.