Composed Catastrophe

by Cotton Candy Clouds   Aug 12, 2008


Why do i let you
do this to me?
Why can't i just
set myself free?

I know what i want
but how do i get there?
Why can't i just snap
out of this straight stare?

The locks have obviously
recently been changed.
All your feelings
for me rearranged.

You have a whole new
look, inside and out.
Is she really the one
who erases all the doubts?

I'll have to learn to live without
the caressing words you whispered.
Learn to deal with the fact that
forever you will kiss her.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    Sad!
    "Why do i let you
    do this to me?
    Why can't i just
    set myself free?"
    I think many people know how that feels.

    "I'll have to learn to live without
    the caressing words you whispered.
    Learn to deal with the fact that
    forever you will kiss her."
    That's just so tragic! Amazing work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cody Jo as you no

    This is suchhhhhhhh an amazing poem I love it

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Dear Tabi,

    Letting go of someone you love is the hardest thing to do, especially when you feel you are made for him...
    A wise man once told me that when you close the door to your past, a new door opens and luck will find its way to you once again.
    I hope it will, for you:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    A great read! very very sad. great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Ur poem is simply written that's why it's touchable..I really enjoyed reading it so much..
    Good job,plz keep it up..

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