Star lit hearts

by Cotton Candy Clouds   Aug 12, 2008


I can't wait for the day all
my saved wishes come true.
When finally my thoughts and
dreams will get to meet you.

We both have craved
for this for so long.
It's only fair to give
us our own love song.

Your lips will have the
chance to hug my cheek,
and my heart will finally
receive the comfort it seeks.

Slowly, you will
pull back my hair
and lock me in
such a loving stare.

Keep a long
and gentle gaze.
As i look into your eyes,
they are just like a maze.

The beat of my heart
pounds back to yours.
And finally, my heart can
open its such dusty doors.

Memories my heart has
yet to embrace.
And those feelings you get
when you meet face to face.

*dedicated to nic : ) *

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  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Don't use & it takes away from the poem some. Other then that the rest of the poem was great. I saw nothing else that would need fixed. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Slowly, you will
    pull back my hair
    and lock me in
    such a loving stare

    ^^^
    I would not know of any girl who does not like to be looked at that way!
    A very sweet love poem with an excellent flow.
    You did really well on this ,Tabi:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    Awww!! hehe very sweet!! greatly expressed!

  • 15 years ago

    by Jaimee

    Awww, this was really cute.
    Great job =]
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Aww... it's cute.. I love it.Awesome job.. Keep it up =)