Im not here to impress

by Kris   Aug 15, 2008


I am not here to impress
Impress I will not do
dont like what you get
You wont like what you see

See what you want
But see inside of me
Nothing but discomfort
Other then the outside of me

Hide till I please
Please while I hide
Cover the flesh
The flesh has bin eating me inside

Buried along side the evil
The one thats bin trapped in to me
Kill all the hate
And abundant the truth
thats bin hid aside

Find ones self again till this discomforting ride
Is over till the one come forth and saves us all

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  • 15 years ago

    by Kuro

    I liked it but it seemed like it was a bit generic. first stanza describes apathy and stanza's 1 and 2 talk about not liking yourself, while 3 talks about something inside, 4 i liked because it describes your feelings more poetically...and 5 confused me a little.

    it seems like you are trying to describe a lot of feelings. it would be better if you might try and focus on certain emotions and feelings and then move to the next feeling. that way we could more easily understand what you're talking about. i'm not saying it was bad.... i'm just saying that i don't think it all necessarily fits together well.

    you might try breaking down all the feelings into seperate poems or extending the length of this one. seems like you got more to describe, so why stop?

    i hope i've been some help,
    ~Ben

    • 10 years ago

      by Kris

      Ha hey thanks bin awhile since Iv bin on here but dude you pin pointed that one it was ment to confuse and question..? Lol the meaning was " I'm at one with myself yet ill show a smile yet all I wanna do is frown... But can't cuz I found myself" read 1, 4 and 5 lol might make more sence?

  • 15 years ago

    by Kris

    Please let me know what you think...

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