by Ria Aug 17, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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When I was small I wrote a letter |
by Sumit Ojha
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Oh... Really excellent poem... (5/5) |
by PS
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Ooof. the ending is so sad. wow. definately powerful. the building of hope, the youthful need, and that crushing at the end. and the ugliness of it contrasts so starkly with the beauty of the beginning. (i dont mean your writing btw) Great job! |
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Amazing poem u wrote here. I love it! thw words were just beautiufl. the flow was nice. this was very unqiue but amzing. it was just a big WOW!! i love it. and keep it up! Great job. |
by Autuumnbree
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Great poem, this poem is really different from many that I've read on this site. I think it's sad but touching and leave the reader want more...........GJ |
by steve
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I loved it. The ending really surprised me! That's pretty mean, I hope it isn't a true story |