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by Magdana Gedeon Aug 25, 2008 category : Life, society / faith, religion
My past and my future I am running I don�t know what to do. My past is scary My future is bleak. I am running from my past. I am hiding from my future. Is there anyone Who can help me? Who is willing to help? Lord I know you see Please help me I am drowning. I am running Can I really hide? Or is it time to pay up? Creator of all things, Owner of past and future Rescue me please. Mistakes I have made I could never repair Lord here I am, As the potter And I am the clay Lord breathes life back into me. Jehovah, rescue me Maker of all things Reconstruct my soul Almighty, accept me please I am running from my past Give my future a second chance.
by Magdana Gedeon
Thank you!
by Poet on the Piano
"I am running I donâ??t know what to do." Just delete that a?? thingy... "I am running from my past. I am running from my future." I feel like in the second line you could put another word instead of running. Maybe try "hiding" or something to that extent? Otherwise, this poem is really good. Very touching and heartfelt. Keep writing, always and forever....